Question

书面表达(15分)

为了能提高中学生的英语口语表达能力，教育局举办了英语口语风采大赛，你的同学刘琳也积极参加了本次活动，她向你讲述了参加的经历。请你根据她所提供的信息，以李琳的身份写一篇短文。

Before	1.It’s my first time to … …
2.nervous can’t sleep well all night … …
3.English teacher and classmates helped me give me some advice … …
When	4.only want to try my best … …
After	5. excited and happy get the good result … …

要求：1.表达清楚，语句通顺、流畅，意思连贯。2. 文章必须包括表格所提供的信息，并作适当的发挥。3.词数不得少于80个词。

Answer 1

I took part in the English oral compeition. It was my first time to take part in that compeition, so I felt very nervous. Before the competion, I couldn’t sleep well all night. Our English teacher and classmates know that, they all helped me to solve the problem. They advised me to listen to music to relax myself. They also told me if I tried my best, I would win.

During the compeition, I only wanted to try my best to do well, I didn’t think about anything. To my surprise , I won the first place.

I felt excited and happy for the good result. I also felt thankful to my teachers and friends. just with their help , I could get such a good result.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。根据同学李琳的叙述，描述李琳参加英语口语大赛的经历。根据内容可知用过去时态，第一人称。写作中注意运用表格中提供的句式。

【亮点说明】这篇短文符合题目要求，表达思想基本清楚，内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，具有逻辑性。

考点：表格作文。