Question

以My friend and I为题，写一篇短文。

要求：1. 字数不少于60字。

      2. 用比较级描述你与朋友的外貌，性格特征、兴趣爱好，学习等方面的异同。

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Tom is my best friend, and we get along with each other quite well. He is taller than me ,but I am stronger than him, because I like playing all kinds of sports. But Tom is quieter and smarter on study. He likes reading and listening to music, especially English songs. There are so many differences between us. But we also have something in common. We both like playing computer games. And on weekends we often do homework together and he helps me with my study. He is such a nice friend.

【解析】

这是一篇以我和我的朋友为题的命题作文。在写作前要审清题意，看清要求。作文要求用到比较级来写我和朋友在外貌，兴趣爱好等的异同。所以在写作时一定要用到比较级。可以用第一人称来写。写作时理清思绪，注意句子的完整性和句与句之间的衔接，可适当利用连词和带有总结性的句子，使文章更紧凑和流畅。

【亮点分析】

这篇文章紧扣题意，结构完整，句意表达清晰完整。文章中用到了很多不错的短语和句式，例如get along with相处；There are so many differences between us我们之间有很多不同； have something in common相同之处； he helps me with my study他帮助我学习；He is such a nice friend他是一个多好的朋友啊。句与句之间用到了一些连词如but, especially, and 等，使逻辑思维更强。

考点：命题作文