Question

【题目】 书面表达

你的的笔友Tom居住在北京，请根据表格中提供的信息，介绍一下他的情况。（80词左右）

时间	来到中国已经两年了，在北京工作。
旅游	曾经去过长城，故宫等名胜。
喜好	过去喜欢看科幻小说，现在对中国古典书籍很感兴趣，已经读完了2本名著。
工作情况	早晨8点起床，乘坐地铁去上班，空余时间练习汉语。
梦想	去很多不同的地方，了解中国文化，品尝中国美食。

I have a pen friend named Tom.

Answer 1

【答案】I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing. And he has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest. He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics. He gets up at 8 a.m. and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time. He teaches English in a middle school in Beijing. He works hard. He likes China. He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food in the future.

【解析】试题分析：本文是材料作文。你的的笔友Tom居住在北京，请根据表格中提供的信息，介绍一下他的情况。根据内容可知本文使用的时态有一般现在时，一般过去式和现在完成时。写作时，列好提纲，注意使用连词，句型、句式，使文章整体意思连贯，表达流畅。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。（一）列提纲：1. 来到中国已经两年了，在北京工作。It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing.2. 曾经去过长城，故宫等名胜。He has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest.3. 过去喜欢看科幻小说，现在对中国古典书籍很感兴趣，已经读完了2本名著。He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics.4. 早晨8点起床，乘坐地铁去上班，空余时间练习汉语。He gets up at 8 a.m. and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time.5. 去很多不同的地方，了解中国文化，品尝中国美食。He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food.（二）根据提纲连词成句，连句成篇，注意连词的使用。（三）写完以后，在阅读一遍，检查单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，大小写，标点符号，主谓一致等是否有错误。