Question

今天上午你们班级举办了爱心义卖(charity sale)活动，根据提示写一篇日记。内容要点如下：
同学们准备了自制的模型飞机，风筝等。
很多老师和同学受邀参加这次活动，本次活动很成功，
义卖所得的2000多元已全部捐给希望工程(Project Hope)．
这是一次有意义的经历
5. 我们希望……
注意：1. 词数70左右，日记开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 日记应包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
3. 第5要点的内容须用1-2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥。
Friday，June 4th                                                         Sunny
This morning our class had a charity sale on the playground．_______________________
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Answer 1

This morning our class had a charity show on the playground．We prepared many things and they were all made by ourselves, such as model planes, kites and so on. Many teachers and students were invited to take part in it. It was a great success. We got over 2000 yuan in the end. We have donated the money to Project Hope. It is a meaningful experience. I hope every can give a hand and the world will be much better.

这是一篇给材料作文，所给材料比较简单，需要自己围绕材料适当发挥。在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性。结合材料可知本文主要是一般过去时态，人称问题比较复杂，注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。