Question

根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍自己的梦想家园。

词数：70左右

要点：1．我的梦想家园在山脚下，很大，有三层楼。

2．屋前有一个大花园和一个温室( green house)，屋后有一个篮球场。

3．-楼有一个游泳池，一个家庭影院，一个游戏室。

4．二楼是客厅、餐厅和厨房。

5．三楼有我父母的卧室，我哥哥和我弟弟合住一间卧室，我有我自己的卧室。

My dream home

My dream home is at the foot of a hill. ____________________________________

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I hope my dream will come true.

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

My Dream Home

My dream home is at the foot of a hill. It is very big. There are three floors. There is a big garden and a green house in front of the house. Behind the house there is a basketball court. On the ground floor there is a swimming pool, a home cinema and a game room. On the first floor, there is a sitting room, a dining room and a kitchen. On the second floor, there is a bedroom for my parents. My elder brother and my younger brother share a bedroom. I have my own room. I hope my dream will come true.

【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我梦想的家。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It is .....There are......及I hope ......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达希望自己梦想成真。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我梦想的家的位置，接下来介绍梦想的家的设施和结构，最后希望自己的梦想能实现。此处用了 in front of ， On the ground floor， my own room等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。