Question

书面表达。（20分）

请根据下面提示，以Modern inventions为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。(标题和开头已给出，不计入总次数)

Introduction	许多现代发明给我们的生活带来了巨大的变化。他们改变了我们的生活方式。（开头已给出）
Main body	冰箱	在古代，人们使用盐来帮助他们长时间的保存肉和鱼。夏天时，新鲜食品会在几小时变坏。而冰箱的发明解决了这一问题。
洗衣机	过去，人们用手洗衣服。这既累又要花费很多时间。随着洗衣机的发明，人们有了更多的时间来放松。
飞机	很久以前，人们主要乘船去旅行。现在飞机使得旅途变得更加舒适。
……	……(请例举一项现代发明，并谈一谈其给我们的生活带来的变化)
Conclusion	总之，在现代发明的帮助之下，我们的生活得到了很大地改善。

Answer 1

Many modern inventions have made a great difference in our life. They have changed the way we live.

In ancient times, people used salt to help them keep fish or meat for a longer time. Fresh food would go bad in summer in a few hours. The invention of the fridge has solved the problem.

In the past, people washed clothes by hand. It was tiring, and it took a lot of time. With the invention of the washing machine, people have had more time to relax.

In the old days, people travelled by ship. Now planes have made journeys more comfortable.

People kept in touch with each other by writing letters in the past. It often took long time to receive the reply. With the use of the Internet, people can easily get replies from each other by QQ, Wechat, or Face Book.

In a word, our life has improved greatly with the help of modern inventions.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如With the invention of the washing machine, people have had more time to relax.等，In the past等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

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