Question

【题目】写作。

根据下面的内容要点写一篇短文介绍马克·吐温。

1.美国著名作家，写了许多著名的小说；

2.1835年出生于佛罗里达的乡村，4岁时全家搬到城里，12岁时父亲去世；

3.从童年开始工作，做过不同的工作，他最著名的小说之一是《汤姆·索亚历险记》

4.他写作的才能并非从小就有，而是来自于他个人的经历。

参考词汇： 小说novel 童年childhood 个人personal 佛罗里达Florida

汤姆·索亚历险记 The Adventure of Tom Sawyer

Mark Twain

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Answer 1

【答案】

Mark Twain, one of the best known American writers wrote a lot of famous novels in his life. In 1835, he was born in a village in Florida. His family moved to the city when he was 4, at the age of 12, his father died.

Mark Twin has been working since his childhood, and he has done many different jobs. One of his most famous novels is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. His ability to write is not from an early age, but from his personal experience.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇短文介绍马克·吐温。短文要包含所有提示内容，要做到语句通顺，意思连贯，主旨健康，中心突出。时态以一般过去时态为主，人称为第三人称。

写作亮点：本文包含了所有内容要点，文章开篇点题, 特别是一些连词的运用，使语句更加通顺，连贯。时态运用非常准确，且做到了主谓一致，无语法错误。结构严谨。His ability to write is not from an early age, but from his personal experience.使文章很有说服力，阐明了自己的观点。