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最近,你们学校开展了以“中国梦,我的梦”为主题的活动,作为一名中学生应该有自己的梦想, 你的梦想是什么呢?请以“My dream”为题写一篇英语短文。

要求:1.描述自己的梦想。

2. 如何实现这个梦想。

3. 80—100 个词左右,可适当发挥。

My dream

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven. I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.

To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,介绍自己的梦想以及如何实现它。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时,人称为单数第一、第三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:My dream is...;When I was...; Now I’m ....;In order to ....; I’ll give my love to...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后要表达自己梦想会实现的愿望。

写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了自己的愿望,接下来介绍产生这个愿望的原因,最后指出如何实现自己的愿望。此处用了were very friendly to,cheered me up, hoped to,achieve my dream, as much as possible,out of danger 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点:提纲作文。

考点分析: 考点1:提纲作文       提纲作文是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型。中考中的书面表达题,主要有“补全对话”、“连词成句”、“看图写话”、和“根据提示的内容,完成某项写作”等形式,主要考查学生运用已学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能准确表达客观事实,阐述个人观点,进行思想交流的书面表达能力。一般要求词数在60-80之间。体裁以叙述、描述人物或事的记叙文为主;有时会用应用文体的形式表达记叙的内容(包括日记、书信、便条,通知书等);有时也会出现类似议论文的形式,例如提建议等。
       为了提高书面表达水平,平时应加强阅读,应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文。只要读得多,背得多,就能出口成章,下笔成文。此外,还要了解英文写作方面的基础知识,掌握常用文体的写作方法。其实,用英文写信,记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法。
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