Question

【题目】假如你是Kate,刚转学到中国一所学校读书,你的朋友Jane很担心你在新学校的生活,请根据所提示信息给她写一封信,告诉她你适应了并且喜欢上了这里的学校生活。要点如下:

1.上午6:50到校,有4节课；下午有三节课，5:30回家。

2.最喜欢周四，因为有最喜欢的英语以及美术；认为数学有点难。

3.在新学校有了一个好朋友Nick，他经常在数学方面帮助你。

4.放学后,经常和Nick一起去打排球。

5.学校生活忙碌但是很有趣。

DearJane,

Thanks for your last etter.Don't worry about my new school life here.T'm fine here because Ilike my school life.

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Yours，

Kate

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jane,

Thanks for your last letter. Don't worry about my new school life here. I'm fine here because I like my school life. My new school life is busy but interesting.

Every day I get to school at 6:50 am and go home at 5:30pm. We have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. My favorite day is Thursday ，because I have English and art that day. The two subjects are my favorites. But I think math is a little difficult.

At school, I also have a new friend ，Nick. He often helps me with math. After school, I often play volleyball with him.

Yours,

【解析】本文是Kate叙述在信中叙述了自己喜欢上了新的学校，并在信中介绍了自己 在新学校的日常生活，既然介绍的是日常生活，所以句子的时态用一般现在时，句子的主语用第一人称，要注意上下文的衔接，不要遗漏要点。注意主谓一致的问题。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：worry about担心；get to school到达学校；help sb with sth帮助某人做某事。用了because引导的状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。