Question

【题目】书面表达

96.作为一名中学生，我们不仅要有独立意识，还需有团队合作意识。在团队合作学习中，我们能互相学习，互相帮助，共同讨论。能分享学习中的快乐与悲伤，能感受到爱与被爱。让团队合作精神伴随我们成长!

请你以 How to learn together as a team?为标题写一篇英文演讲稿，代表学校参加达州市中学生英语演讲比赛。

要求：1．卷面整洁(无污迹)，书写工整(有美感)。(卷面分1分)

2．全文字数90词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入单词总数。

3．条理清楚，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。

4．内容尽量包括提示信息，并适当发挥；文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。

5．参考词汇：friendly, help, discuss I(talk, listen), share, grow up,

How to learn together as a team?

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is “How to learn together as a team”.

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That’s all for my speech. Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】How to learn together as a team

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is "How to learn together as a team". It's

very important for us to learn, think by ourselves. And it is also important for us to learn together

as a team

First, we must be friendly to others, whether beautiful or ugly, tall or short, kids or adults. We should help others when they are in trouble. For example, your classmates can't finish homework Your friend is becoming upset when he can't solve the problems between his parents and him. Here is no doubt that helping others is helping itself. In a team, anyone is helped and anyone helps others.

Second, we are supposed to discuss. When we discuss, we either talk or listen. We have to talk

clearly and we must listen carefully, so you can find where the mistakes will be and how you should correct them. After discussing, you are sure to get more.

Third, in a team, it is very important to share. Many of us are only one or two from our families. We are used to thinking about ourselves. So we are loved more. Now it is time to learn to share with others; Share love and loved; share happiness and sadness and so on. Let’s grow up in sharing!

In a word, we are like a family in a team. Let’s help each other, discuss happily and share little by little. Then we grow up.

That’s all for my speech. Thank you!

【解析】

这是一篇话题作文，根据题目中的相关信息介绍一下How to learn together as a team? 所提供的内容中列举了我们不仅要有独立意识，还需有团队合作意识。在团队合作学习中，我们能互相学习，互相帮助，共同讨论。能分享学习中的快乐与悲伤，能感受到爱与被爱。时态以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称。注意演讲比赛中必须包含所提供的内容中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

We should help others when they are in trouble. 当别人遇到困难时，我们应该帮助他们。when they are in trouble.是由when 引导的时间状语从句。

【高分句型二】

We have to talk clearly and we must listen carefully, so you can find where the mistakes will be and how you should correct them. 我们必须清楚地交谈，我们必须仔细听，这样你就可以发现错误在哪里，你应该如何改正。where the mistakes will be是由where 引导的宾语从句。