Question

国有国法，校有校规。在你的学校中一定有很多规章制度来规范中学生的行为，使学生们都能健康成长。请你写一篇小短文向大家介绍一些校规、校纪，如能用自己的观点来评价就更好了。（80词左右）开头已给出。

What rules do you have in your school?

There’re a lot of rules in our school.

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Answer 1

【答案】

There are many rules in our school, At our school we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. I think young people should look smart and so I'd like to wear my own clothes. If we have to wear uniforms ,we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.              

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: There are有……；have to不得不；I'd like to我喜欢……等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

考点：提纲作文。