Question

书面表达

根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。（信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信内）

假设你叫李明，是美国中学生Tom的笔友。请您根据他给你的电子邮件内容写一封回信。谈谈你喜欢读的书及你对读书这种爱好的看法。

Dear Li Ming, I’d like to know what you often do in your free time. Do you spend much time on reading? What do you think about reading? I like reading novels (小说) very much. My favourite book is Jane Eyre. It was written by Charlotte Bronte. She was born in Britain. She was a famous writer in the world. She wrote many books and Jane Eyre was one of the best. In this book, she wrote about a woman named Jane Eyre. Jane Eyre wasn’t pretty, but she had a strong idea of self-respect (自尊心). She never gave up whenever she met any difficulties in her life. I was deeply moved by her story. I like the book very much. Yours, Tom

 

Hi Tom,

It’s very nice to hear that you like reading a lot.

                                                                  

                                                                  

                                                                  

                                                                  

                                                                  

                                                                  

                                                                  

                                                                  

                                                                  

                                                                  

Yours,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi Tom,

It’s very nice to hear that you like reading a lot. It seems that we have the same hobby. I enjoy reading as well. In my free time, I usually spend one hour or more in reading, such as novels, newspapers, plays and so on. One of my favourite books is Romeo and Juliet. It is one of Shakespeare’s most famous plays and he wrote it in 1595. The play tells the story of two young lovers. They cannot be together because of the two families. The two lovers die at the end of the play. Although it is a sad story, I still like it because it tells us what the true love is. I advise you to read it if you haven’t read it before. In my opinion, reading is an excellent hobby. It can bring us enjoyment and success. It can also make us grow as a person, develop our interest and help us learn more knowledge.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：本文的写作首先对Tom和自己有同样的爱好表示非常高兴，然后介绍自己在空闲时间经常看书最喜欢的书是什么，可以用One of my favourite books来表达，进而介绍这本书所主要讲述的内容，故事情节的发展、结局和我为什么喜欢它的原因等，最后发表自己的对阅读书籍的看法，它能带给我们成功和喜悦，帮助我们学习到更多的知识，可用It can bring us enjoyment and success，help us learn more knowledge.等来进行表达。

考点：提纲类写作

点评：初一英语的作文，学生首先要将题目审清楚，抓住要点进行写作。平时的作文写作着重培养连词成句的能力，要在“准”字上下功夫。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面。对于中学作文的写作，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文。在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文。