Question

【题目】【2016江苏苏州】书面表达。

上海迪斯尼乐园于今年6月16日正式开放，许多孩子打算前往游玩。假如你是一名乐园的志愿者，请你根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒他们文明游园。

注意：1. 词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词解释，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；

3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇：theme n.主题； firework n.烟火

Good morning , children !

As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland , I’d like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it .

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The park is worth your visit . I hope you will have fun .

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, children!

As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland, I’d like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it.

The Disneyland is in the east of Shanghai. You can get there by underground. It’s made up of six theme parks. You can join in different kinds of activities there, such as enjoying wonderful musicals or plays. Also, there’re lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose. At night, you can watch fireworks.

However, it’s important to behave well in the park. Littering isn’t allowed. You should keep the park clean. Remember to wait for your turn anytime. Moreover, it’s impolite to shout loudly in public.

The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用固定短语如be made up of（由……组成），different kinds of（不同种类的），such as（例如），lots of（许多），wait for（等等），为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。