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【题目】朋友，还记得那些陪伴你左右的同桌（deskmate）吗？他们乐观向上；他们自强不息；他们诚实可信；他们勤奋好学 … … 你的生活因他们而精彩！请通过一件事的记述，让我们认识一下你的一位勤奋好学的（hard-working ）同桌吧！
要求：1）请根据所提供的信息材料和话题（不要逐句翻译），写出结构严谨、内容完整、语言丰富优美、语法准确、可读性强的短文。2）至少 80 词。3）不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名。4）题目自拟。

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【答案】One possible version：

My Deskmate

I have many deskmates these years， but I think Wang Lei is the best one. We are neighbors， and we are good friends. We go to school， go home and do our homework together. He is a clever boy， and he is very handsome. His lessons are very great. Especially he is good at English and maths. Everyone in our class likes him.

Last year I addicted to the computer games. I didn't want to study， and I was often late for school. My deskmate Wang Lei was very worried. He told me the harm to play computer games and helped me to study lessons. Little by little， I caught up with the others. We were both happy. I'm very lucky to have this deskmate. Do you think so?

【解析】本文自拟题目写一篇短文，根据所给信息可知，会使用到一般现在时和一般过去时态。然后灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。