Question

12．假如你是Gina，根据下面的图片，以"My bedroom"为题介绍你的卧室．提示词：chair，bookcase，table，bed，baseball，sofa，books，schoolbag，pencil box，watch，TV，in，on，under
注意：1请不要写真实姓名和校名．
2 用上所给提示词并适当发挥．
3字数40词以上．
My  bedroom
Look，this is my bedroom．There is a chair，a bookcase，a table，and a bed in it．The bed is near the table．There is a bookcase near thebed，too．Many good books are in the bookcase．There is a TV on the table，my baseball is under the bed．The schoolbag and the pencilbox areon the sofa．My bedroom is beautiful．I like it very much．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There is a chair，a bookcase，a table，and a bed in it里面有一把椅子，一个书柜，一张桌子和一张床．这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
The schoolbag and the pencil box are on the sofa书包和铅笔盒在沙发上．on the sofa在沙发上．

解答 My bedroom
Look，this is my bedroom．【开头点明主题】There is a chair，a bookcase，a table，and a bed in it【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】．The bed is near the table．There is a bookcase near the bed，too．Many good books are in the  bookcase．There is a TV on the table，my baseball is under the bed．The schoolbag and the pencil box are on the sofa【高分句型二，注意介词的使用】．My bedroom is  beautiful．I like it very much．【正文部分详细介绍房间】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．