Question

11．安顺市今年能否创建"全国文明城市"成功，不仅要靠市委市政府的全力推进和各单位的扎实工作，更要靠每一位安顺市民从自身做起，一言一语现内涵，一举一止显文明．作为中学生的你，也有义务为我市争创"全国文明城市"贡献一份力量．请根据要求，完成A、B两项写作任务．
A．请你根据自己的想法，用完整的英语句子或简略的英语答语回答下面五个问题．
1．Is Anshun a more beautiful city than before？
2．Do you think it is necessary for Anshun to be a civilized（文明的）city？
3．Are you happy with the strive？
4．What should you do to make Anshun become a green city？
5．How can you become a civilized middle school student？
B．请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的同答，以"What should I do for the strive？（我该为创建做什么？）"为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文．文中不得出现真实校名和人名．
参考词汇：
1．创建（n．）strive
2．申报bid for
3．称号（n．）title
4．全国文明城市Nationally Civilized City
5．为…作贡献contribute to
What Should I Do For the Strive？                                                                              

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
   As a middle school student，I am terribly happy for that，because I will do what I can to help the strive．作为一名中学生，我非常高兴，因为我会尽我所能去帮助创建．   这是because引导的原因状语从句，因为…，同时这个句子里又有一个宾语从句what I can to help the strive．
高分句型二
it is everyone's duty to contribute to the strive and struggle for the honor of"Nationally Civilized City"，isn't it？争取创建"全国文明城市"并且为之奋斗是每个人的责任，不是吗？这是一个反意疑问句，前半句是肯定句，后半句是否定句．

解答 What Should I Do For the Strive？As we know，Anshun city is becoming more and more beautiful．Actually，Anshun is bidding for the title of Nationally Civilized City，which is a must for our city to become green and famous in China．【要点一，点名主题，引出下文】
As a middle school student，I am terribly happy for that，because I will do what I can to help the strive【高分句型一，注意从句的使用】．What should we do then？Firstly，we can not litter everywhere and we should keep the street clean．Secondly，we should follow the traffic rules all times to keep safe．Thirdly，we should treat each other politely and behave in a civilized way．More importantly，we must plant more trees，flowers and plants to make the city greener．【要点二，详细介绍如何创建文明城市】
To sum up，it is everyone's duty to contribute to the strive and struggle for the honor of"Nationally Civilized City"，isn't it？【要点三，结尾紧扣主题】【高分句型二，注意反意疑问句的使用】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．