Question

假如你是Lily, 你身体很健康，请以How to Keep Healthy为题写一篇80词左右的短文，向你的同学介绍介绍你的日常保健方法。（6分）
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Answer 1

How to Keep Healthy
If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. We should get up and go to bed early and sleep at least eight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking, swimming, playing balls and so on. We should also eat healthy food —— more fruit and vegetables and less meat. If you don’t feel well, you’d better see a doctor at once. And we should wash our hands before meals and drink enough boiled water every day. It’s necessary for our health.
We should not throw litter about, keep long fingernails and smoke, etc. It’s also very important.

试题分析：本文已经给出了写作话题，动笔前要先平常自己的日常保健的做法，列出要点然后按照要点适当发挥，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，用一般现在时进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】有些句子使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: get up；,it’s a good place to live and study；go to bed；had better等。还用了一些连词如：if和and等。提醒学生学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理性。