Question

【题目】假如你叫张华，今天是6月6日（星期六），你和同学们一起去森林公园郊游，在那里度过了快乐的时光。 请根据图中的提示以及内容要点，用英语写一篇日记。

内容要点：1.天气；

2.目的地；

3.出行方式；

4.活动包括野餐、放风筝、爬山……；

5.发表自己的感受。

参考词汇：

地点	活动			感受
Forest Park	picnic	fly kites	climb the mountain	happy

要求：1.日记开头已给出，不计入总词。

2.必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发挥。（参考词汇仅供参考）

3.文章条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，80个词左右。

4.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在学校的名称。

________________________________________________________________Saturday, June 6th

__I had a good time today._________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

Saturday, June 6th

I had a good time today. It was a sunny day. I went to the ForestPark with my classmates. At 8；00 a.m, we met at the school gate. Then we took a bus to get there. On the way , we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there , we had a picnic under the trees. The food is delicious. After that, we flew kites on the grass. Later, we started to climb the mountion. At the top of the mountion , we took many photos. At5；00pm,we got home together. We were tired but happy. What a pleasant day it was!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用图片和提纲来给材料的作文。要求描写自己和同学们一起去森林公园郊游的日记。日记中要包括：日期，天气，郊游的地点，出行的方式，进行的活动。观察图片可知其中提供了郊游的地点，活动（野餐，放风筝，爬山）及心情。根据描述的是过去的事情，所以短文主要用一般过去时。写作中注意不要遗失要点，注意连词的应用。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语。如表示时间顺序的副词及短语： Then, After that, Later, 结果状语从句so … that, When引导的时间状语从句，but引导的转折句，抒发感情的感叹句What a pleasant day it was!等，这使文章条理，有逻辑。