Question

根据下面的提示，以“希望小学”为题写一篇短文，词数80词左右。
1．中国农村许多孩子因穷困而失学。2．好心人捐款助学，创办了希望小学。3．许多希望小学条件良好，有教学楼和漂亮的操场。4．希望更多的人来捐助希望小学，使更多的孩子受到良好的教育。
词汇提示：Hope Primary School希望小学  poverty贫困  contributing money捐款  teaching condition教学条件
Hope Primary School
                                                                             
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                           

Answer 1

In the country of China, Many children can’t go to school because of poverty. But so many warmhearted people are helping them by contributing money. And with the money, they are building schools. Many of these schools have very good teaching conditions. In these schools you can find modern teaching buildings and a beautiful playground. The students in these schools study very hard and always do a good job. Because they all know that Hope School brought them the chance to go to school again. I hope more and more people will help the Hope School, and more and more children will be able to go to the first-class school.

试题分析：本文的写作应分为四个层次，首先对创办希望小学的原因进行阐述，可以根据提示中国农村许多孩子家境贫寒来写原因；其次介绍很多热心人士都慷慨地捐献了他们的钱来资助创办希望小学这一现象；再将所修建的希望小学校舍情况进行描写；最后发表自己的倡议，倡议更多的人加入进来为希望小学出一份力，说明这样做的意义。
【亮点说明】：本文不难写，对于作文的写作要注意详略得当，本文中可以将中国教育的现状和很多人捐钱来建学校这两点进行略写，将校舍的美丽环境进行详细的描写；对自己所发出的的倡议及这样做的重大意思进行详细的书写。这样文章就显得详略得当、相得益彰。同时写的过程中注意运用平时经常使用的句型，经典的句式来表达自己的观点。