Question

【题目】 假如你是王鹏, 你的北京好朋友 Andy 发邮件询问你父母上班后自己在家学习的情况，并跟你倾诉上次网上测试英语写作分数比较低，心情低落。请你根以下提示给他写一封回信，鼓励他不要放弃，并给他提出一些关于提高英语写作的建议。

写作要点：

1、很高兴收到他的邮件。

2、介绍你自己在家学习的情况：

(1)每天早起读英语，练习发音和听力；

(2)从早上 8:00 到下午 3:00 上网课。有时做些进行室内运动，放松身心；

(3)每天坚持看新闻半小时，了解世界各地发生的事情。

3、请对自主学习期间，如何提高英语写作能力提出建议。

Dear Andy,

Hope everything is going well._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I'm looking forward to your reply and your good news.

Yours,

Wang Peng

Answer 1

【答案】例文：

Dear Andy,

Hope everything is going well. Glad to hear from you. I think I study better at home than my parents do because I think it can not only exercise my independent learning ability, but also my self-control ability. When my parents go to work, I get up early every day to read English, practice pronunciation and listening. From 8:00 in the morning to 3:00 in the afternoon, I have online classes. After class, I do my homework quickly. If I have time after finishing my homework, I will do some indoor sports to relax myself. Every day, I keep watching the news for half an hour to understand what happens around the world. Sometimes I try to write the news in English. Although I may meet some new words sometimes, I will not stop and I will look up the dictionary or ask my teacher for help.

I think you can recite more good words and sentences when you read. In addition, you can also insist on writing a few sentences in English every day. If you insist on writing for a period of time, I believe your writing will improve.

I’m looking forward to your reply and your good news.

Yours,

Wang Peng

【解析】

1. 题干解读：文章是一篇书信作文。文章主要是描写自己在家独自学习的情况的介绍以及针对朋友“英语测试写作没有考好”的问题给出一些自己的意见，重点是描写在家学习的情况，要把题目中给出的写作要求全部包含进去，注意语法的应用，注意语句之间的逻辑性。