Question

14．假如你是红星中学初三毕业生，三年初中学习生活即将结束，请以"My Middle School Life"为题写一篇短文．简略将母校做一下介绍，重点回顾自己的中学生活，并简要说明你将如何回报母校．
要求：
1．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．
2．词数不得少于80．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：Looking back，I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure回首过去，我经历了成功的喜悦或失败的痛苦．这是一个现在完成时的句子，go through经历，the joy of…的快乐，喜悦，the pains of…的痛苦．
高分句型二：Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study老师对我们很友好，对我们学习总是很严格．本句使用两个固定短语：be friendly to sb．对某人友好；be strict with sb．对某人要求严格．

解答 My Middle School Life
        How time flies!Three years passed in a blink．（总体说明三年初中的时间之快）Lots of memories left in my head．Teachers，classmates，hard work and above all friendship stay in mind．Looking back，I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure（高分句型一）．Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study（高分句型二）．Classmates and friends help me so much．With their help I've made great  progress．But I'm a careless boy．And I always make mistakes which can be avoided．（回顾自己的中学生活）Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings．As it is said，"It is not our abilities that show what we truly are，it is our choice．"The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future．And I believe I can do it．I think this is the best return to my middle school．（展望未来的生活及自己的决心，这就是对母校最好的回报）

点评 在写作时，要尽量使用高分单词，短语和句子，句式，以便为文章增色．