Question

写作(10分)

假设上周末你和父母去北京游玩。请根据下面的提示，以A trip to Beijing为题，写一篇80词左右的短文（标题已给出，不计入总词数）。

A trip to Beijing

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

A trip to Beijing

Last weekend my parents and I went to Beijing by plane. We climbed the Great Wall and took lots of photos there. The Wall is about 6,700 kilometres long, and 4-5 metres wide. It’s wide enough for five horses or ten men to walk side by side. “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a real man.” I’m proud that I’ve climbed the Great Wall. During the trip we also ate Beijing Duck. We really had a good time in Beijing. I hope I can visit it again some day.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让我们介绍上周末和父母去北京游玩的情况。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如It’s wide enough for five horses or ten men to walk side by side. “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a real man.”（不到长城非好汉）等好的句子。

考点：提纲类作文。