Question

【题目】Writing.

In the past, most Chinese families have got one child in them. But recently, the government has relaxed the family planning policy, which means each couple are allowed to have two children. Would you like to have a brother or a sister who grows up together with you?

Now please write a passage of about 80-120 words to introduce your opinion. The following points should be included:

1. Is it necessary for a family to have more than one child? Give at least two reasons for it.

2. What’s the situation in your family? Are you the only child or not? List what makes you happy and unhappy.

3. Give at least two suggestions to the families with two children.

Answer 1

【答案】First of all, two-child policy is the gift for some only child.For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples.

In my family ,my parents have a only child. I also have some happy things.I can enjoy some delicious food by myself. But I have no playmate in my family. Sometimes. I may feel lonely.

If parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better. Also, two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population.

【解析】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如first of all，grow up，grow older，marry with，burden on，have to do， take care of，by oneself，have no playmate，the number of等。而For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. / when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally,/ It would be much better.等多种表猜测句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。