Question

【题目】假如你是学校的小记者，日前对学校“最美志愿者”Amy进行了采访。请根据以下采访记录，用英语写一篇稿件，向读者介绍她的情况。

兴趣爱好	1.读书。每天约花一小时阅读。 2.旅游。去过中国西部地区。
感人事迹	1.贫困学生患重病，为其集资做手术。 2.发现女童辍学，联系政府帮助其复学。
未来计划	1.今年暑假:宣传环境保护，因为……(原因自拟)。 2.以后有机会时:……(内容自拟)

注意:1.词数90词左右。短文开头已写好，不计入总词数。

2.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。

3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Amy was presented the Most Beautiful Young Volunteer in our school.

Answer 1

【答案】Amy was presented the Most Beautiful Young Volunteer in our school.She likes reading. She spends about one hour reading every day. And she likes travelling. Too. She has visited many places in the west of our country.

When a boy from a poor family got a serious disease. Amy organized several activities to raise money for him. With her support, the boy was cured after the operation. Last year, she found a girl had to leave school, she wrote to the local government and helped the girl return to school.

This summer, she decides to tell people to protect the environment because she finds the environment is changing for the worse. If possible, she may take part in some charities to work for more people. She thinks it will be meaningful.

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以介绍“最美志愿者”为主题，结合所给的写作材料，阐述“最美志愿者”Amy的兴趣爱好、感人事迹和未来计划。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态、一般过去时态和一般将来时态等，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中了spend…doing…，the west of our country, With her support，help...do..., decide to do, take part in 等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了宾语从句、原因状语从句、条件状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。