Question

请你根据提示内容，向别人介绍一下上个星期天你和朋友去公园游玩的情况，写一篇60词左右的短文。

1. 公园离你家有5公里远，骑自行车去的

2. 呼吸了新鲜空气（breathe, fresh）；观看了动物表演；去餐馆吃了哪些食物

3. 是美好的一天；很高兴

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Answer 1

【答案】

Last Sunday. I went to the park with my friends. It was a sunny day. The park was five kilometers from my home. So we went there by bike. There were a lot of trees in the park. The air was fresh. I enjoyed it. Then I saw an animal show. It was very interesting. In the afternoon , I was a little hungry. So we went to a restaurant. We ate some delicious food like noodles, dumplings. Later we went home. I was very happy. It was my favourite trip.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。题目中给出的材料较为详细，我们只要将这些内容正确表达出来即可。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，句式，关键单词等问题。结合材料可知本文主要是第一人称，时态位一般过去时态。为了是表达更有逻辑性，可以使用序数词，连接词等。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。