Question

根据所给提示以My dream home 为题，写一篇短文。要点如下：
1. 房子很大，是一个有花园和游泳池的三层房屋，花园里长满了花，很好看。
2. 底楼有一个大的厨房和餐厅，我可以邀请20 多个朋友来吃饭。
3. 二楼有电脑房，和一个大客厅，可以和朋友 在客厅聊天、看电视很舒服。
4. 我有自己的卧室，大又干净。
5. 最喜欢的地方是阳台，是看书，聊天的好地方。
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Answer 1

My dream home
My dream home is very big. It has three floors, and it is a building with a garden and a swimming pool. There are many kinds of flowers in the garden. They are very beautiful. There is a big kitchen and a dining hall in the first floor. I can invite more than 20 friends to my home to have dinner. On the second floor, there is a computer room and a big living room. I can have a chat with my friends in the living room. It is also comfortable to watch TV in it. Of course, I will have my own bedroom. It is big and clean. My favourite place is the balcony. I can read and chat there.

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据所给信息来描述一下自己理想中的家是什么样子的，题目中给了我们详细的信息，这所房子有几层，每一层都有哪些设施，干什么用等。我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容翻译出来。通过审题可知，这篇作文应主要使用一般现在时，第三人称的形式。在写作时，我们可能用到的句型有there be 有，表示在某地有什么东西。还有have a chat 聊天；invite 邀请等。写作时可以按照楼层的顺序来描写，这样可以使文章看起来有条理。
【亮点说明】这是一篇很优秀的范文，作文中作者非常详细的向我们介绍了他梦想中的家是什么样子的。作者在描述时非常的有顺序，按照每一楼层的顺序，每个楼层都有什么设施，干什么用，如作者可以在一楼的餐厅里邀请朋友们来吃饭，在二楼的客厅里看电视，在阳台上看书、聊天等。叙述很有条理，不乱。内容也很完整，包括了题目中所给的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。文章中较好的句式有It is a three-storied building with a garden and a swimming pool、I can invite more than 20 friends to my home to have dinner、It is also comfortable to watch TV in it等。