Question

【题目】书面表达。Dear all,

假如你是你校学生会主席李浩，号召同学们为王玲踊跃捐款。

王玲是第二中学的学生，八年级一班的班长，今年14岁，平时学习刻苦，成绩优秀。她的爸爸是位工人，妈妈是位农民。她家境贫寒。现在她患重病住院，需要手术。希望大家踊跃捐款，这样她就可以接受手术（手术费约十万元），很快恢复健康。

要求： 1、不能逐条翻译所给信息，可以适当增减内容；

2、短文中不得出现你的真实地名、人名和校名；

3、词数100字左右。文章开头与结尾已经给出，但不计入总字数。

Give a helping hand

Dear all,

A student from NO.2 Middle School needs our help!

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_____________________________________________________________________________Thanks a lot for your help!

Li Hao

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Give a helping hand

A student from NO.2 Middle School needs our help! Her name is Wang Ling, monitor of Class 1, Grade 8.She is fourteen years old. She often works hard and she is good at all subjects. Her father is a worker and her mother is a farmer. She has a poor family. Now she suffers from bad illnesses and is in hospital. She needs to be operated on. Because the expense of the operation is about 100000 yuan. I hope everyone will donate money to her actively, so that she can get the operation in time and she will recover soon .

Thanks a lot for your help!

Li Hao

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍号召同学们为王玲踊跃捐钱。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Her name is…， Her father is …，She has...，Because the expense of the operation is ...，I hope ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了需要捐钱的学生名字，接下来介绍王玲的学习和遭受的困难，最后希望大家积极捐钱，并谢谢大家的帮助。此处work hard, be good at, suffer from, be in hospital, need to do sth, operate on, donate ...to...等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。