Question

【题目】上个星期你们学校去阳光镇参观了“国际机器人展”，你对机器人有了许多了解，请你根据提示写一篇短文，谈谈如果有了机器人将对你的生活带来的变化，可适当发挥。开头已给出。词数80左右。

好处：你有更多空闲时间从事自己的爱好，可以帮助你做家务，如洗衣服、做饭、打扫卫生。

坏处：会感染病毒，引起许多麻烦。会把早餐放进洗衣机，会把衬衫扔进垃圾箱。最后不得不送回机器人商店。

Last week I visited International Robot Exhibition in Sunshine Town __________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Last week I visited International Robot Exhibition in Sunshine Town. If I own a robot, it’ll change my life in many ways. Some are good but some are bad. I’ll have more free time for my hobbies. It can help me do housework. It can wash clothes, cook delicious food and sweep the floor. But if it catches a virus, it’ll cause a lot of problems. I’ll find breakfast in the washing machine and clean shirts in the dustbin. In the end, I have to send it back to the robot shop.

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“机器人将对生活带来的变化”为主题，结合所给的写作材料，阐述机器人对人们生活带来的好处与坏处。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般将来时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练, 时态运用准确。文中in many ways, but, help sb.do sth., in the end, send...to...，have to等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如：并列句、条件状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。