Question

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生命在于运动，多运动可以让我们保持身心健康。在春季，跑步会让我们的双腿更灵便；在夏季，游泳可以让我们保持更好的身材；在秋季，爬山可以锻炼我们的意志；在冬季，滑冰和玩雪让我们在冰冷的冬季找到更多乐趣。请同学们以 “I enjoy ____________”为题写一篇80个单词左右的短文。
参考词汇：healthy, fat, tired, active, fresh, chocolate, build up, have great fun
温謦提示：1、短文要求语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范。
2、文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在班级，否则将被扣分。

Answer 1

I enjoy running
I am a 15-year-old boy. Now I’m quite healthy. However, one year ago I was fat. I liked to eat chocolate, and I got tired easily. One morning, I saw some young men running in the park. They looked really fit and active. So I started running. Now I have a 2-mile run every morning. I drink milk and eat fresh fruit. Healthy eating habits and running help to build me up. I feel well and look fit. Running is my favorite sport.

试题分析：本文的写作重在分清楚层次之间的关系，首先对自己以前的不好的精神状态及饮食习惯进行描写，突出自己很容易变累got tired easily，不健康unhealthy等，然后对自己是如何改变的，通过自己所喜欢的运动达到现在非常的健康，并且也有了很好的饮食习惯，最后点明某个运动是自己最喜欢的运动。
点评：本文难度不大，写作条理性要把握好，对于初二的作文，不要求有很华美的词语，重在培养自己连词成句的能力，避免中式英文。在平时的练习中要多去背诵范文，对表达好的句子，短语要进行积累，并默写，考试前再集中看一下，这样做到有备无患。