Question

俗话说“失去了才懂得珍惜”。时间过得很快，你们即将初中毕业。同学，你是否在学习上有一些让你感到遗憾或后悔的事情呢？如果在过去三年中，你某学科弱；你错过了很多机会；假如再给你一次机会，你会尽最大努力学习吗？比如：课前预习、上课听讲、及时复习、认真作业……

请你以“Give Me One More Chance”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，告诉我们你的想法。开头已给出，不计入单词总数。

温馨提示: 1.短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。

2.这些单词或短语也许对你有帮助：be weak in，regret(后悔)，what if，never too late to learn，preview（预习），practice, go over, as … as possible, try one’s best

Give Me One More Chance

   How time flies! We have spent three years living and studying together in the school.

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Give Me One More Chance

How time flies! We have spent three years living and studying together in the school.

Now, I am leaving our school. I want to enter a good school, but I am weak in English. I regret that I haven’t learned English well in the past three years. I missed many chances. What if I had another chance?

As the saying goes, “It’s never too late to learn”. If I had one more chance, I would practice listening, reading, speaking and writing as much as possible. I would preview lessons before classes, listen carefully in class, go over lessons and finish my homework on time.

I believe where there is a will, there is a way. I will try my best to learn it well.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般过去及现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:be weak in在某方面不行；what if假使……将会怎样；as much as possible尽可能的；go over复习；on time按时；try one’s best to do尽力做某事等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

考点：考查提纲类作文。