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约翰(John)过去学习不太好,父母为此经常生气,他甚至想放弃学习。但在老师和同学们的帮助下,他下决心努力学习。现在他变了很多,各科成绩都很好,并且成了班上的好学生。请以Never give up为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,号召大家不要轻言放弃,要变问题为挑战,勇敢面对。(语句通顺,字迹工整)
                                                                               
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     

The student John did not study hard and the grades were so bad .And his parents were angry with him. Even he made his mind to give up his study, but he has made some change and the grades in all subjects are very good with the help of the teacher and his classmates. Suprisely, he has become the best student in his class. From that we must study hard and not say the words “give up”. We can meet the difficulty and make the challenge.

试题分析:在写作时可分三步进行:1,审题构思。通过审题,确定文章体裁和时态。本篇作文是记叙文,主要写约翰过去学习不好,甚至想放弃,后来在老师和同学的帮助下发生了很大变化,故主体时态是一般过去时和现在完成时,同时要注意不能遗漏提供的要点,并可以适当发挥。2,列举要点not study hard, give up his study,with the help of the teacher and his classmates,become the best等等。3,连词成句、连句成篇。在进行此步骤时,应注意使用一些连接过渡词,以使文章更流畅、自然。
【亮点说明】本文语句平实,但流畅自然,完全表达了题目中的要点。
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