Question

11．在日常学习和生活中，你一定得到过很多人的帮助和关爱，此时此刻你会有很多感谢的话要说，请根据下面所给的提示用英语写一篇短文．
提示：
1．感谢的人：亲人、老师、同学…
2．感谢他们的原因：生活方面、学习方面…
3．对他们的美好祝福．
要求：
1．内容包括所给提示；
2．写作中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
4．文章开头已给出，不计入词数．
    In my life，I get lots of help and love from many people．Now，I want to express my thanks to them．First，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①When I②have problems with my study，they are so patient and helpful．
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②have problems with …在某方面有困难
【高分句型二】
I will remember the days when we play and study together．
we play and study together由关系副词when引导的定语从句，修饰先行词the days．

解答 In my life，I get lots of help and love from many people．Now I want to express my thanks to them．First，I want to thank my parents．They provide a happy life for me．They do much for me and give me so much love．（感谢父母及原因）Second，I want to thank my teachers．They are always busy doing their work．When I have problems with my study，they are so patient and helpful．【高分句型一】（感谢老师及原因）Third，I want to thank my classmates．They make me feel less lonely．I will remember the days when we play and study together．【高分句型二】（感谢同学及原因）
Thank you，my parents，my teachers and my classmates．I hope you are in good health and have a better future．（美好祝愿）

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．