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根据下面的图画，请你用英语写一篇短文，大约包括6～9个句子，短文要求达意，正确、连贯．短文开头已给出．

It's seven o'clock in the evening.

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学生：习作： 　　It's seven o'clock in the evening. Tom's family is(X1) all at home. Tom is listening to the music. His sister is playing(X2) a cat. His father is reading a book, His mother is making a telephone call with(X3) somebody. His grandparents are watching TV. There is a picture and a clock on the wall, and there is a light and some books on the desk. They are all enjoying themself(X4). 　　剖析：family指整个家庭时是集体名词，相应的动词用单数，指家庭的一个个成员时，相应的动词用复数．例如： 　　My family is a large one．我家是个大家庭． 　　My family are all sitting around the table eating．我家人都坐在桌旁吃饭． 　　很显然文中指的是Tom家的成员，因此谓语动词应改用复数are． 　　2．play是玩耍、游乐；而“拿……玩，以……自娱”，要用play with，此处是逗猫玩，所以应改用playing with． 　　3．给某人打电话应用make a telephone call to somebody． 　　4．enjoy oneself=have a good time．表示“玩得很高兴”．them是复数，所以self也应改用其复数形式selves，即：themselves． 　　总评：本文要点齐全，达到了预期的写作目的，文章语言流畅、时态正确、方位有序、意思表达清楚，文中的错误主要集中在谓语动词的单复数和一些动词短语的搭配上，希望作者引起重视．