Question

19．三年的初中生活就要结束了，在我们的成长过程中，既有快乐，也有烦恼．请用英语写一篇短文，内容包括：
1What's the biggest problem you met in the school or at home？
2How did you feel at that time？
3How did you solve the problem？
4What can you learn from it？
要求：1 字数：不少于60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数．
2 内容须包含所提示内容，可适当发挥．
3 不要涉及真实的人名和校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．
My middle school life is coming to an end．During the three years，not only did I have happy time，but I had kinds of problems．My biggest problem was                                           ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I did the homework①as quickly as possible ②instead of being slow我尽可能快的做作业而不是做的慢．
①as…as possible尽可能…
②instead of 代替 而不是
【高分句型二】
As we know，practice makes perfect我们都知道，熟能生巧．
practice makes perfect熟能生巧，谚语的运用．

解答 My middle school life is coming to an end．During the three years not only did I have happy time，but I had kinds of problems．My biggest problem was too much homework．（最大的问题是什么）It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better，even the best in my lessons．（当时的感受）
    How can I deal with the problem？On the one hand，I concentrated more on my study in class．On the other hand，I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow，【高分句型一】as a result，I spent less time on homework，and I wasn't worried any more．（怎样解决）
As we know，practice makes perfect．【高分句型二】Complaining or waiting can't help．Instead we should be active to face our problems．（学会了什么）

点评 写作时要注意一些几点：
（1）应抓住文章中心，围绕主题，根据提示列出要写的信息要点．
（2）注意内容是否充实、积极和健康．
（3）注意文章的结构层次，要凸显文章的主题．
（4）要注意语言规范，表达准确，选材造句都尽量使用学过、见过的语言材料．