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1．王老师是一位英语老师，40岁左右，身材高大，有些发胖，戴眼镜．

2．在数学方面，经验丰富，对学生：和工作要求严格．

3．王老师乐于助人，在她的帮助下，学生：的英语提高很快．

4．词数80～100词．

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学生：习作： What a Good Teacher 　　Miss Wang is my English teacher. She's about forty years old. She's always putting on(X1) a pair of glasses. She's tall and fat, she looks very strict, but in fact, she's very friendly to us students. She's one of the most popular teachers in our school. She teaches our English(X2) so well that we all love her. 　　Miss Wang is always ready to help us with our studies. Look. She's helping a student over there. She often tells us how to learn English well and tells us(X3) the best way to remember new words. She also likes us to ask all kinds of questions. 　　Miss Wang is very strict in us(X4) and works rather hard. She often works till midnight. Usually, we have a dictation twice a week and she always check our answers very carefully. She even makes us(X5) preview all the new lessons in Book Three. 　　What a good kind teacher Miss Wang is! 　　剖析：1．wear表示“穿戴”的状态，用于一般现在时表示经常的穿戴情况，用于进行时表示暂时的穿戴情况，而put on是表示“穿”的动作，试比较： 　　He wears a blue shirt．他(经常)穿蓝衬衫． 　　He is wearing a blue shirt．他(此刻)穿着蓝衬衫． 　　He is putting on a blue shirt．他(正在)穿(上)一件蓝衬衫． 　　此外“穿、戴”的宾语可以是hat、coat、trousers、shoes、socks、glasses、necklace、watch、flower，此文中的王老师天天戴眼镜，强调的是状态，所以putting on要改为wearing． 　　2．“teach sb sth．”是固定短语，意为“教某人做某事”，应用宾格us． 　　3．此处的tell us与前面重复，可省略． 　　4．“be strict in”是“对某事严格(要求)”，而“对人(要求)严格”应用with． 　　5．make有“迫使”的意味，因此此处应改为asks us to(do)． 　　总评：此文通过对王老师辅导学生：与努力工作两件事的描写，表达出作者对老师的崇敬与爱戴之情，作者较好地运用了主题句及所学的短语、句型和语法，第一段的肖像描写也很成功，全文表达较为顺畅，但应注意同义词用法的辨析．