Question

【题目】感恩是一个永恒的话题，我们应该对帮助过自己的人心存感恩。感恩之际，我们也应该心存善念，去帮助需要帮助的人。请你以“Learn to Be Thankful”为题，根据以下提示和要求写一篇80词左右的英语短文。

提示：1. 描述某人(如父母、老师、同学、朋友甚至陌生人等)在学习、生活上帮助过你的某件事；

2. 你帮助过某人的事；

3. 你对这些事的感想。

要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1-3项的内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息。

Learn to Be Thankful

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Answer 1

【答案】Learn to Be Thankful

I still remember a rainy day when I was in Grade 7. On that day, I overslept and hurried to school by bike. At a street corner, I fell down and hurt my legs so badly that I couldn’t move at all. A passer-by sent me to the hospital at once. I was so thankful that I decided to help others from then on. A few weeks later, on my way to school, I saw a blind man standing at a crossing. I helped him cross the street and showed him to the place that he wanted to go to. How happy I was!

It’s important to learn to be thankful. If everyone can help each other, the world will be full of love.

【解析】【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如in Grade 7，by bike，fall down，at a street corner，at all，at once，from then on，on my way to school，a few weeks later，learn to be thankful，help each other，full of love等。而I still remember a rainy day when I was in Grade 7./ I fell down and hurt my legs so badly that I couldn’t move at all. / If everyone can help each other, the world will be full of love.等多种从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。