Question

【题目】本卷完形填空A)最后指出：“Ifyouhavetalentandhardworkforyourdream,andyou’ll succeed.”你同意文中这个观点吗？对此观点你有何看法？请根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法,阐述理由,并举例说明。

写作要点:1.Youropinion (agreeordisagree...);

2.Reasons (clever,workhard;badmemory,askforhelp...);

3.Anexample (yourself/apersonaroundyou/afamousperson/...)

要求：1、短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚,行文连贯，可适当发挥；

2、如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名或地名；

3、词数不少于80个。

Answer 1

【答案】Possible Version One:

I agree with the opinion. Many famous persons have talents. And they work hard for their dreams. And they succeed at last.

My classmate Li Hai is very clever and he studies hard every day. He has a good memory and he remembers very quickly. He can write down what our teacher said in class. After class, he reviews what he has learnt in time. So he is always the first place on every exam in our class.

So let，s try our best to study hard and use rightly our abilities and talent. Work hard for our dreams.

Possible Version Two:

I disagree with it. We all know, not everyone who has telent can succeed. Only a very small number of people make it to the top.

My classmate Li Hai is not very clever, but he studies hard every day. He has a bad memory, so he has to remember things again and again. He has to write down what our teachershave said in class. And after class, he has to ask teachers or classmates for help again and reviewthem for a long time. But he can also get good grades on every exam, too.

So let's try our best to work hard for our dreams.

【解析】

1. 题干解读

本文属于观点看法类作文，在写作时应注意三个方面：1. 你是否同意这个观点；2. 你这样认为的原因；3.举例来支持你的观点。

2. 例文点评

例文采用三段式；用第一人称来表述自己的观点；时态采用一般现在时，第一段点名自己的观点，并进行了适当的丰富；第二段写出了原因并且列举了身边的案例来对观点进行举例说明，极具说服力和感染力，最后一段呼应开头，首尾呼应，叙述完整且条理清晰。

3. 高分亮点

短语：agree with, work hard, at last, write down, in time, disagree with, a very small number of, ask… for help, get good grades。

句型：let sb. do sth., try one’s best to do sth., 祈使句，定语从句。