Question

作文 20分

据报道，中学生的身体素质有所下降。这一情况已经引起全社会的关注和教育部门的高度重视，这是某中学关于青少年体育锻炼的宣传标语（slogan）：EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY KEEPS ILLNESS AWAY! 请你根据下面的要点和要求，用英语写一篇80——100词的短文。

要点：1．锻炼身体的好处：strong，healthy, energetic，…

2. 锻炼身体的方式：ball games，running，swimming．

3.请你谈谈对学校开展体育锻炼的看法或建议。

Answer 1

One possible version：

Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic. And taking exercise can keep us strong, we won't get tired or sick easily. Just as the slogan says, "Exercise one hour a day keeps the doctor away."

There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and ball games. Now we students have to do too much homework after school. I hope teachers will leave us less home work so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sport activities for us.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍锻炼身体的好处，方式和建议。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： Either study or work is…；There are …；We students have to…；I hope…；等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意使用合适的连词，让语篇连贯。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了健康的好处，有利于学习和工作，接下来介绍锻炼身体的好处和方式，最后提出建议，要多找时间参加锻炼。此处 either…or…; be based on;keep healthy; take part in等这些词组的运用和动名词短语taking exercise 做主语的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。