Question

3．我国是一个发展中国家，我们应该勤俭节约，使中国成为一个节约型的社会．我们中学生应该从身边的点滴做起，节约能源． 你是如何做的？请你就这一个话题写一篇小短文，要求语句通顺，语法正确，意思完整，80词左右．
What will you do to save energy？I think we should do followings：First，it's best to ride a bike to school，don't take a bus or a taxi．Second，I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom．Third，in my free time，I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling．The fourth idea is turning off the shower when I'm not using it．Fifth，it is important to save water and money【高分句型】．Also，I won't spend too much money on expensive things．Last，we had better not cut down the trees，we have to take care of the trees【高分句型】．I'll try my best to save energy，I hope I can do something for our country．．

Answer 1

分析 重点短语：
1．take a bus or a taxi乘坐公交车或出租车
2．turn off the lights 关闭电灯
3．try one's best to save energy尽力节约能源
高分句型：
【高分句型一】it is important to save water and money节约水和钱是很重要的．（It's+形容词+to do 做某事是…）
【高分句型二】we had better not cut down the trees，we have to take care of the trees．我们最好不要砍伐树木，我们必须保护树木．（had better not do 最好不要做某事）

解答 What will you do to save energy？I think we should do followings：First，it's best to ride a bike to school，don't take a bus or a taxi．Second，I will remember to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom．Third，in my free time，I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling．The fourth idea is turning off the shower when I'm not using it．Fifth，it is important to save water and money【高分句型】．Also，I won't spend too much money on expensive things．Last，we had better not cut down the trees，we have to take care of the trees【高分句型】．I'll try my best to save energy，I hope I can do something for our country．

点评 在写作时需要明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，平时多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇．