Question

【题目】短文改错

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：1. 每句不超过两处错误；

2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Swimming is very popular on summer. People likes swimming because water makes them to feel cool. If you like swimming and swim in a right place, it may not dangerous. Last year, more than ten people die because they weren’t carefully in the river near our city. Most of them were student. They often thought they could swim very good and nothing could happen to they, but they were wrong. Please look after ourselves and loving our life.

Answer 1

【答案】Swimming is very popular on summer. People likes swimming because water makes them to

in like

feel cool. If you like swimming and swim in a right place, it may not∧ dangerous. Last year,

be

more than ten people die because they weren’t carefully in the river near our city. Most of

died careful

them were student. They often thought they could swim very good and nothing could happen

students well

to they, but they were wrong. Please look after ourselves and loving our life.

them love

【解析】

本文讲述了很多人在夏天喜欢游泳，但是去年十多个人因为粗心，在河里游泳时死去。因此在游泳时要照顾好自己，真爱我们的生命。

第一处错误：表示在夏天，用短语in summer，因此把on改为in。

第二处错误：主语people是复数形式，故谓语用复数形式，因此把likes改为like。

第三处错误：make sb do sth让某人做某事，因此删掉them和feel之间的to。

第四处错误：位于情态动词may not后作谓语，用动词原形，因此在not和dangerous之间加be。

第五处错误：根据last year可知此处用一般过去时，因此把die改为died。

第六处错误：作为系动词weren’t的表语，因此用形容词，故把carefully改为careful。

第七处错误：主语most of them是复数，故此处用复数名词作表语，因此把student改为students。

第八处错误：修饰动词swim，故用副词，因此把good改为well。

第九处错误：作为动词短语happen to的宾语，故用宾格形式，因此把they改为them。

第十处错误：此处是祈使句，故谓语用动词原形，因此把loving改为love。