Question

18．1．在我们的成长过程中，父母为我们付出了很多．我们应该学会感恩，学会让父母放心，让父母开心．请根据提示，以I Love My Parents为题，写一篇短文．字数80词左右．
1．生活上，我们应该…；2．学习上，我们应该…；
3．交友上，我们应该…；4．在家里，我们可以…．
注意：1．可适当增减内容，使短文意思完整、连贯．
2．书写规范，文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名．
I Love My Parents
It's really hard for parents to bring up their kids．So it is important for us to learn to be thankful．First，we should learn to be independent in our daily lives．And starting good habits may make parents happy．As we know，our study always worries parents，so what we need do is to study hard and be better students．As for friends，we should let them know who are our friends and what we do together．Also，we are supposed to help with housework more often．Then parents will have more time to relax．Parents'love is the most valuable in the world．So it's our duty to show our love to our family and make them happy．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：So it is important for us to learn to be thankful所以学会感恩是很重要的．it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式．
高分句型二：Also，we are supposed to help with housework more often此外，我们应该更多地帮助做家务．be supposed to do sth．理应做某事．

解答 I Love My Parents
It's really hard for parents to bring up their kids．So it is important for us to learn to be thankful．（高分句型一）First，we should learn to be independent in our daily lives．And starting good habits may make parents happy．（生活上）As we know，our study always worries parents，so what we need do is to study hard and be better students．（学习上）As for friends，we should let them know who are our friends and what we do together．（交友上）Also，we are supposed to help with housework more often．（高分句型二）（在家里）Then parents will have more time to relax．Parents'love is the most valuable in the world．So it's our duty to show our love to our family and make them happy．

点评 （1）句型多样化，不要I（We）…到底，使人觉得乏味．（2）适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句．（3）进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句．（4）适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词．（5）偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感．