Question

书面表达部分 （10分）

假如你叫杰克，下面是你同班同学的体育活动情况。请根据表格信息写一篇短文，不少于80个词。

Name	Favorite sport	How often	Favorite player	Dream
Steve	swimming	twice a week	Sun Yang	great swimmer
Marry	tennis	every day	Li Na	dancer
Jack	football	often	Ronaldo	scientist

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Answer 1

One possible version：

I am Jack. My favorite sport is football. I often play football with my friends. I like Ronaldo very much. I want to be a scientist in the future. This is my dream. Steve is my classmate. He is good at swimming. He goes swimming twice a week. His favorite player is Sun Yang. His dream job is to be a great swimmer. What about Mary? Tennis is her favorite sport. She plays tennis every day. Her favorite player is Li Na. But her dream is to be a dancer.

【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，杰克介绍他同班同学的体育活动情况。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My favorite sport is......；I want to be......；His dream job is......；What about ......？等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了自己喜欢的运动和他的梦想，接下来介绍他的三个同学最喜爱的运动以及他们的梦想。此处 want to be，in the future, be good at, every day等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。