Question

5．某英文报正在就"What is beauty in your mind？"这一话题进行征文．请根据表格提供的信息和要求写一篇短文向该报投稿．

外表美 good looking	有的人不满意自己的外表，故而不惜重金去做手术
你的观点	美真的可以人造吗？如果这样，…．
心灵美 spiritual beauty	真正美丽的人并不是有一副好的面孔，而是有一颗宽广和善良的心
你的观点	1）心灵美比外表美更为重要 2）…

要求：1）短文包括相关信息的介绍和你自己的观点．
2）词数：100．题目和开头已为你写好，不记入总词数．
3）不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名；
4）请将作文内容写在答题卡对应的位置上．
参考词汇：standard标准； unique 唯一的
What is beauty in your mind
Everyone admires beauty．Everyone has his own standard about beauty． Nowadays some people think that they own beauty if they have a good looking．They are not satisfied with their appearance．They spend much money taking a kind of operation．Can beauty really be man-made？If so，everybody can get beauty．As a result，there is no beauty at all．
Some people think that a really beautiful person is not the one with a good looking，but with a broad and kind heart．Good looking is pleasant while spiritual beauty is more important．If you have a kind heart，you own real beauty．
I think the appearance is given by our parents and is unique in the world．Everyone should value it．Many heroes don't have beautiful surface．However，their beautiful images often come to our minds．Their beauty comes from their contributions to the society．
So don't judge whether a person is beautiful or not according to his or her appearance．
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Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是以What is beauty in your mind？为题谈谈什么是美．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．外表美；有的人不满意自己的外表，故而不惜重金去做手术
2．心灵美：真正美丽的人并不是有一副好的面孔，而是有一颗宽广和善良的心
3．我的观点：美真的可以人造吗？如果这样…；心灵美比外表美更为重要…

常用到的重点短语：
be satisfied with 对…满足
spend 时间+doing sth 花时间做某事
come from 来自
according to  依据于…
【高分句型】
1．Nowadays some people think①that they own beauty②if they have a good looking．
①that引导的宾语从句，作为think的宾语．
②if引导的条件状语从句．
2．Can beauty really be man-made？If so，everybody can get beauty．
if引导的条件状语从句，so替代上文的beauty can really be man-made．
3．I think①the appearance②is given by our parents and is unique in the world．
①think后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②一般现在时的被动语态am/is/are+过去分词．

解答 Everyone admires beauty．Everyone has his own standard about beauty．
Nowadays some people think that they own beauty if they have a good looking．【高分句型】They are not satisfied with their appearance．They spend much money taking a kind of operation．（外表美；有的人不满意自己的外表，故而不惜重金去做手术）Can beauty really be man-made？If so，everybody can get beauty．【高分句型】As a result，there is no beauty at all．（我的观点：美真的可以人造吗？）
Some people think that a really beautiful person is not the one with a good looking，but with a broad and kind heart．（真正美丽的人并不是有一副好的面孔，而是有一颗宽广和善良的心）Good looking is pleasant while spiritual beauty is more important．If you have a kind heart，you own real beauty．  （心灵美比外表美更为重要）
I think the appearance is given by our parents and is unique in the world．【高分句型】Everyone should value it．Many heroes don't have beautiful surface．However，their beautiful images often come to our minds．Their beauty comes from their contributions to the society．
So don't judge whether a person is beautiful or not according to his or her appearance．（ 我的观点）

点评 1．仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点．
2．提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．
3．根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯．