Question

【题目】书面表达, 根据表格信息完成一篇短文

以下两张是你的全家福和你自己房间的照片。请根据图片和表格介绍这两张图片。

The photo of your family	The photo of your room
Names, ages, jobs(职业)，phone numbers	3 things, colors, sizes(大小)， where they are

要求：1. 仔细审题，作文必须包括题目中所有内容，文章中不能出现真实姓名。

2. 必须有至少一个复数句型。

3. 适当使用连词。

4. 衔接自然，逻辑清晰，注意层次清楚。

5. 书面规范，卷面整洁，80词左右。

Answer 1

【答案】My family and my room

Hello, I'm Yang Ping. Here are two pictures. One is my family photo. The man is my father.His name is Yang Lin. He is 40 this year. He works in a hospital. This woman is my mother. She is a teacher. My parents are very kind to others. Sure! the boy between them is me. I am a student.

The other photo is my room. Is it beautiful? Look! There are many toys on the floor. The desk is under the window. It's about half a metre high. A reading lamp is on the desk. It's not big but very nice. And my chair on which I sit to study is in front of the desk. I love my room, and I love my families better.

【解析】

Hello, I'm Yang Ping. Here are two pictures. One is my family photo. The man is my father.His name is Yang Lin. He is 40 this year. He works in a hospital. This woman is my mother. She is a teacher. My parents are very kind to others. Sure! the boy between them is me. I am a student.

The other photo is my room. Is it beautiful? Look! There are many toys on the floor. The desk is under the window. It's about half a metre high. A reading lamp is on the desk. It's not big and very nice. And my chair on which I sit to study is in front of the desk. I love my room. I love my families better.

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如one …the other，in a hospital，be kind to others，on the floor，under the window，about half a metre high，in front of等。特别是there be结构句式There are many toys on the floor.和定语从句And my chair on which I sit to study is in front of the desk.的运用，丰富了短文内容，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。