Question

18．某英文报纸的"English Study"专栏向中学生征稿，要求同学们介绍一下自己英语学习的现状，谈谈对英语学习的感受，以及进一步提高英语水平的打算．请你投稿．
提示词语：talk about，learn English，useful，important，work hard，improve
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①In fact，②it's not difficult to learn③if we work hard at it in proper ways．事实上，如果我们用适当的方法努力不难学习，
①in fact事实上．
②it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
③if引导的条件状语从句．
【高分句型二】
I'm sure①I'll ②make progress in listening and speaking in the future．我确信我将会在听力和口语上取得进步．
①be sure that 从句，确信…．
②make progress取得进步．

解答 I'm happy to talk about my English．I've learned English for about nine years．Now I'm good at reading and writing，but a little weak in listening and speaking．（自己英语学习的现状）
In my opinion，English is useful and important，so we should learn it well．In fact，it's not difficult to learn if we work hard at it in proper ways．【高分句型一】（学习的感受）
In order to improve my English，I'm going to watch English TV programs and listen to English songs in my free time．Besides I'll try to speak English as much as possible．I'm sure I'll make progress in listening and speaking in the future．【高分句型二】（提高英语水平的打算）

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．