Question

9．根据要求完成大作文，词数：80～100词．
如果每天多出一小时空闲时间，你会做什么呢？读书、听音乐、做运动、上网？…不同的同学会有自己不同的打算．请根据你对朋友打的了解，设想他们会有怎样的安排．写出3个好朋友的活动，再谈谈你自己的设想及理由．
提示：
（1）文中不能出现校名、人名等真实信息．
（2）文章开头已给出，不计入总词数．
What  do you want to do if you have one more hour to relax yourself？Different  students  may  have different  ideas．I think  my good friends  will make  good use of their free time．Lily likes reading．I think she will spend time reading more books so that she can know more about the world．Linda loves music and movies．She may spend her time listening to music，singing songs and going to the movies．Lucy likes doing sports．She may go out to play volleyball or go swimming with her friends．（三个好朋友的安排）
As for me，I am busy studying every day，so I want to relax．I want to watch TV and surf the Internet．I also want to help my parents do some homework．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①What  do you want to do if you have one more hour to relax yourself，如果每天多出一小时空闲时间，你想做什么？句子中want to do sth想做某事，if引导一个条件状语从句．
②I also want to help my parents do some homework．我也想帮助我的父母做一些家庭作业．句子中want to do sth想做某事，help sb do sth帮助某人做某事，do some homework做家务．

解答 What  do you want to do if you have one more hour to relax yourself（高分句型）？Different  students  may  have different  ideas．I think  my good friends  will make  good use of their free time．（引出话题）
Lily likes reading．I think she will spend time reading more books so that she can know more about the world．Linda loves music and movies．She may spend her time listening to music，singing songs and going to the movies．Lucy likes doing sports．She may go out to play volleyball or go swimming with her friends．（三个好朋友的安排）
As for me，I am busy studying every day，so I want to relax．I want to watch TV and surf the Internet．I also want to help my parents do some homework（高分句型）．（自己的设想及理由）

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文，要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．