Question

书面表达(10分)
假如你是Lily，根据下面表格的内容, 写一篇5个句子以上的短文介绍一下自己。

Name	Lily	Age	13 years old
School	No. 5 Middle School, 16 classrooms
Favourite Food	fish	Favourite drink		tea
Favourite sports	swimming, table tennis, basketball
Telephone number	65353971
Father	policeman, police station
Mother	nurse，hospital

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Answer 1

Hello，my name is Lily.I’m 13years old.Now I am studying in No.5 Middle School。There are 16 classrooms in our school.My favourite food is fish and my favourite drink is tea.I like swimming、table tennis and basket ball.My teleghone number is 65353971.My father works is a policeman,he works in a police station.My mother is a nurse.She works in a hospital.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，题目中给出的材料较为详细。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。写作中注意将材料所给内容介绍清楚，亦可适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行描述，注意时态和主谓一致等问题。写作中注意使用叙述顺序，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用的句式短语较为简单.如:I’m……；My……is……等。但是通过一些代词的使用，如：he、设等的使用，使得文章避免单纯的重复，使得短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。让我们对Lily有了一个比较全面的了解，不失为一篇上等作文。