Question

最近，你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动。请写一篇文章，叙述自己对“中国梦”的理解和感受。词数80词左右。文章开头已给出的，不计入总词数。
内容要点如下：
1.作为一名学生，心中应怀揣着中国梦的理想。
2.为祖国的日益强大而感到自豪（be proud of）。
3.谈谈自己的梦想并写出实现梦想的一些具体做法。如认真学习，强身健体，遵守规则制度，积极参加(take part in)各类有益的活动等。
4.相信梦想一定会实现。
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream.           
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                        

Answer 1

As middle school students, we should have a Chinese Dream. Our country is becoming stronger and stronger, we are all proud of it. And we all believe this dream will come true in the future. I want to be a doctor when I grow up because doctors not only can save people’s lives but also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I must try to study/work hard from now on. I should often do sports to keep healthy. I should obey the school rules and take part in all kinds of meaningful activities.I hope my dream will come true, too.

解析试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
考点：提纲类作文
点评:该题型主要考查学生的语言表达能力，在写作中根据所给提示和语言信息，不遗漏要点，可以适当发挥。做到表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯