Question

【题目】【2016江西】书面表达。

书包伴我学习，伴我成长，某英文报以“My schoolbag”为题，举办中学生征文活动。请根据下列的图表信息，写一篇短文。内容包括：书包的外形特征、用途和书包背后的课业问题以及课余你期望做的事情。

提示：1、短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明;

2、短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;

3、词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总次数。

My Schoolbag

I have a schoolbag._________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

My Schoolbag

I have a schoolbag. It is used for carrying the school things, such as books, pens and so on. It looks like a luggage which always accompanies me in the world of knowledge.

My schoolbag is always by my side. However, it also brings us many problems. We have to do so much homework that we cannot get enough sleep. Instead of enjoying the wonderful weekends, we are forced to have extra classes with it. If we have more spare time, we can take part in sports and actives. Besides, we can develop hobbies and interest as well.

As a middle school student, I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden.

【解析】

试题分析：短文介绍了书包的外形特征、用途和书包背后的课业问题以及课余期望做的事情。要注意句子的时态及语态，不要写汉语式的句子，要符合英语语法。要注意上下文的衔接。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：It is used for carrying the school things, such as books, pens and so on. It looks like a luggage which always accompanies me in the world of knowledge.If we have more spare time, we can take part in sports and actives.用了which引导的定语从句，if引导的条件状语从句，that引导的宾语从句，用了过渡词besides等，增加了文章的亮点。