Question

书面表达。（本题共20分）

假如你是Mike, 最近如东“关心下一代周报”正在评选“最美学生”（the most beautiful student）, 请你根据下面表格中的提示，写一封推荐信给编辑，推荐你的同学Bob。

Personal information 个人基本信息	1. 邱升中学初三2班学生 2. 出生在1999年11月25日 3. 喜欢绿色，认为绿色代表大自然，可以给人能量 4. 喜欢听音乐，音乐能使他放松.
Personality 个性	1. 自信，……(举例) 2. 乐于助人，帮助同学解决学习、生活上问题 3. 聪明，考试总得高分，好几次考班级第一名 4. 勤勉的，……(举例)

要求：1. 须包含以上所有要点，并适当发挥；

2. 词数90词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 条理清晰，语意连贯，字迹工整。

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to recommend Bob as “the most beautiful student” of Rudong.

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I think that Bob can be “the most beautiful student”. I hope that you agree with me.

Yours sincerely,

Mike

Answer 1

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to recommend Bob as “the most beautiful student” of Rudong.He is in Class 2,Grade 3, Qiu Sheng high school .He was born in November 25, 1999 2.He loves green, he thinks green represents nature.He can give people the energy.He likes to listen to music, because music can relax him.

He is self-confidence,he thinks he can do everything very well.He is always ready to help others and he often helps students to solve life problems.He is smart,too.,He always gets high marks in exams.He has got the first in class for several times. He is also diligent.He often gets up very early every morning.

I think that Bob can be “the most beautiful student”. I hope that you agree with me.

Yours sincerely,

Mike

【解析】

试题分析：此篇文章叫作者写一封推荐信给编辑，推荐你的同学Bob作为最美学生的候选人。作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如He was born in November 25, 1999 2.He loves green, he thinks green represents nature.He can give people the energy.He likes to listen to music, because music can relax him.等，Because等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理.

考点：考查提纲类作文。